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First part
Second part
Third part
Why don't we let Kaveri speak a few words?
That was the time, we were studying our Higher secondary. I had lot of friends in my classroom. In particular, my old schoolmates. I used to spend more time with them and we always had fun.
There was 2 guys sitting at the second bench. Their names are Raju & Sukumar.
I knew that they were having a close eye on me always.
One day, Peter who was studying XII standard came to me; and talked about them. He also warned me to be careful; 'because any one of them might be in love with me'. I never had thought in that way. I got confused; why the hell this fellow is concerned more about this matter & me. Later, I got the answer when he proposed to me! :)
Did Raju/Sukumar also propose me? No, I am not going to tell you further.
I am leading a very happy and peaceful life here. I have got a loving family and my loving kids. So, Good Bye !!
She doesn't want to share anything more with us.
Let us go back to our heroes! Let's see What they are going to do?
iPhone 3G which is sitting in the 'SingTel' network rings loudly. Raju looks at the phone, smiles and answers the call.(Why is he smiling: becoz the phone call is from India) Sukumar is on the other end of the line. Both of them were very happy to talk with each other, after a very long time. They started the conversation which is going to last for an hour. After the formal talking are over, Sukumar asked about Kaveri.
"Do you know, how worse I worried when you were absent to classes on that day? I ran like anything to reach your hostel. I got tensed even more when I couldn't find you in your room.
You Stupid!! You were happily swimming in the river, right? Then also you didn't tell me that what were you talking with her?"
Raju replied: Yes da! After seeing the letter in your packet only, i wanted to tell about the previous day conversations.
Sukumar: Yes, now I can remember. Can you please tell me, what happened on that important moment; I wanted to hear it from your mouth.
Raju: That was a cool evening. She came to visit her friend whose house was there nearby our hostel. I was standing outside the hostel when she returned back to catch the bus.
She looked at me for few micro seconds. I slowly started following her. I got a flash in my mind. I just went ahead and stood before her.
I told her that I need to talk to you for some time. She said 'OK' and signalled with her eyes to proceed. I couldn't see her powerful eyes. I just kept my eyes to see the sky and said three words "I Love You!"
She simply smiled after hearing that. And we started walking towards the bus stop.
Sukumar interrupted; Didn't she reply anything?
Raju continued: No, she did reply. She took some time to open her beautiful mouth.
She started with a clever statement! Look Raju, who am I? I responded; you are my classmate.
She said: Yes. Thatswhat, We are students and we come to school for studying. I don't think that this is the age to fall in love. Let us be can good friends. So, please don't mistake me! Can I get into my bus? And she boarded into the bus and had gone.
Sukumar asked: Were you able to accept the fact that she rejected your proposal?
Raju: Yes! But, it took some time for me.
Sukumar: It means, your brain also justified her thoughts!?
Raju: She was clever enough to handle things at that age. If she had accepted my love at that time; I might not have passed even my +2 examination.
Raju: Yes. It is good that you guys approached the matter with lateral thinking. Let me ask you one question. Whom do you think that the Villain of your love? Either Peter or I?
Raju replied: None of you. Then? It is Kaveri! Yes, she did a Villain role by not accepting my Love proposal! "But the fact is, she is the ever green heroine of my first love."
Raju said Sukumar, now it is my turn. Let me shoot you just one question.
"I can accept the fact that you had never told me about your love. But, why didn't you tell/propose your love to her?"
Sukumar replied: If I had proposed her, she might have rejected it for sure. I never wanted my love to become an unsuccessful story. Also, I didn't want to make a bad history by proposing to a girl with whom my thickest friend was in love. One more reason behind it was I didn't want to hurt her feelings. I did read her face before coming to you on that day.
In a way, I can feel happy that she never had rejected my love.
Raju agrees to him and nods his head; Yes, if you had told her she might not have accepted it. It is good that at least your first love is neither failed nor succeeded. Your love is deserved to be an Untold love!!!
Anyways we have had great & lovable memories which we can happily talk about! For that, we should feel happy.
With those words, they just said bye to each other and ended the phone call.
RWH
5 years ago
9 comments:
Nice try...
Keep it up...
Why being so modest na? Please remove the PS. Your story had been far better than most of the shits sorry blogs I write. If you say your is boring, it will mean ours are crap. At least to help us, remove the PS.
I think even Raj did't propose her. He had proposed the sky only isn't it? :) A nice way of proposing. If the other party says, NO, we can say, "come on... I proposed the sky... do you think anyone will propose you?"
thank you for respecting my comment and removing the PS.
Hey.. Kalakkara.. da..
super..
Keep going...
serial maari aarambichu, express vegathula muduchuteengale. serial was better!!
Untold or even failed experience in love(at-least first love) is immortal and never goes out of mind till death... Those memories always buried under all moments but still pops out as bubbles under the water... Lovely story with lovable narration...
~ Shan
Wow...really nice way of taking the audience with you along the story line... idhuku per dhaan "untold" love story-a...nalla iruku....today only I read all the parts from beginning...
enakku orey oru doubt indha kadhayila vara Sukumar neengala?
Amudhan nalla plan dhaanda... propose panradhu annan vazhi kaatruraaru....
naan blog stop panni oru maasam aagudhu..idha padikum podhu enga school life nyabagam varudhu..dont worry engaludhu boys school dhaan...so love story-ku vazhiyilla... vathiyaarta panna settaikal nyabagam varudhu....
yebaa... ennaala mudiyala.... takku takkunu scene maarudu... kabaalnu Kaveri vandu pesittu sidukkunu poitaa... appuram Raju and then Suku.... enakku Sukuva nenachi sirikkaradhaa illa sandhosha padaradhaannu theriyala.... ore oru disappointment.... Kaveriyoda purushan yaarunne theriyaliye..... I think Kaveri is a good girl because she didn't cheat anyone and she got married to a guy their parents pointed. That's my guess. Most lovers marry different persons. Shuck!
hey sathya,
A cool blog and a cool story. A fantastic narration and a great climax.
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